Show don’t tell is a phrase you may have heard before. Writing that shows us things about the character gets the reader more involved in the story than writing that tells the same information. Below are some examples of showing vs telling.
You could say:
“She was sad that he had left.”
Or you could show the reader, by saying:
“She stood watching his car drive away until she could no longer see it.”
You could say:
“He was afraid that the teacher would yell at him.”
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